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#124309 - 03/06/07 06:23 PM Long Hunter
MADTRAPPER50 MADTRAPPER50 trapper Registered: 01/02/07 Posts: 478 Loc: Jackson cty. Wisc.	Feedback welcome. Long Hunter Hunting: all through life for dreams I want to make real. So many times, I've come close. But missed. Still: I keep hunting. Fore I know persistence in this chase is what makes a dreamer try. Edited by MADTRAPPER50 (03/12/07 05:42 PM) _________________________ GOIN' FOR A LOOKSEE
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#132704 - 03/12/07 04:54 PM Re: Long Hunter [Re: MADTRAPPER50]
James James "Frostbite Jimmy" trapper Registered: 12/26/06 Posts: 1491 Loc: Anchorage, Alaska	I like the analogy between hunting and pursuit of your dreams. You might flesh it out more, with a middle stanza showing your failed attempts to bag a dream. Last stanza needs re-worked. "Sport" seems somehow to diminish the chase. "A good Hunter real" seems clunky, and I'm not sure what it means. A real hunter? Jim
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#132820 - 03/12/07 05:46 PM Re: Long Hunter [Re: James]
MADTRAPPER50 MADTRAPPER50 trapper Registered: 01/02/07 Posts: 478 Loc: Jackson cty. Wisc.	Jim, You were correct. After reading it for the gazillionth time I see what you mean. I've made some changes but did not add another stanza as you mentioned. I'll have to ponder that. Thanks for your input. Mark _________________________ GOIN' FOR A LOOKSEE
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