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Bee Determined

Posted By: squacks

Bee Determined - 11/08/19 03:25 PM

Bee Determined written by me

A bumblebee humbles me.
What a determined bit of fuzz!
Experts cry, it's to heavy to fly!
The bee, uninformed, does.
Posted By: slydogx

Re: Bee Determined - 11/09/19 04:16 PM

I really like this one. Something about the rythm and imagery.
Posted By: squacks

Re: Bee Determined - 11/28/19 02:08 AM

Thank you.
I wrote some true humerous stories and a few poems over 20 years ago when I needed to laugh. Found them in an old spiral notebook on a dry box that was stored in the garage. This seems like a fit place for them.
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